(I was having trouble incorporating the "radiation contamination" into the story as a word without making it into an "As you know, Bob" moment. Does this pass muster for the challenge?)
Sharp eye- I've gone back and fixed the errors you mentioned. It was pretty late when I posted this.
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Re: Dang you're fast
Date: 2012-03-01 03:30 pm (UTC)(I was having trouble incorporating the "radiation contamination" into the story as a word without making it into an "As you know, Bob" moment. Does this pass muster for the challenge?)
Sharp eye- I've gone back and fixed the errors you mentioned. It was pretty late when I posted this.